Coursework Presentation
Today we had a panel of teachers and NUWA students who have a lot of knowledge about film and acting asses our coursework idea that we presented as a PowerPoint and give us feedback. My Feedback: Resolution? What's the dialogue? What's the look? Framing? Close-ups? You have a plot but what's your story? You need to identify the raw skeleton of your film to find what's necessary to tell your story, with no story you can't engage your audience Story seems a little shaky, not sure how original it is Interpretive ending? water theme As a result of this feedback I want to create a story board and script to identify the story and work out how I want to end the short film.